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November 12th, 2008, 3:31 am

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Death the Kid,

November 12th, 2008, 6:33 pm


Experimentation Sorry. I was experimenting when I did the page... *sweatdrop* But thanks again for noticing the details. :3

And glad you like it, Darkhall-Howler. <3


September 19th, 2019, 7:45 am


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November 12th, 2008, 4:48 am


a lil critique feel free to disregard the words on ur last panel is smudged took me awhile to figure what it was. it says "i look sad...? how'd he...?" just in case someone else wonders too

that and this may seem mean but colouring the background many diff colours and not colouring some panels is kinda messy/unorganized looking to me. my advice is use the colour that goes well with the mood or leave it white or pick one colour cuz u got 3 shades of blue, green and purple going on in the bg that alot o diff colour for a page. its the same with the peoples if u leave the people white and colour the background peoples eyes tend to wander towards the colourful parts. ur colouring for the eyes work though. if u colour the eyes peoples sight will drift towards the eyes.

sorry i get distracted by things if a like it nuff to stare at it for awhile. didnt notice it earlier til now, it is the last available page and nothing left to do but stare for minut details. that and its 3am now. XD


November 12th, 2008, 7:17 am


totally love the thir and second last panel :D

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